you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: * say where you think you left the papers * explain why they are so important * tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently participated in a conference at your hotel and unfortunately, I inadvertently left some confidential paperwork behind.
I believe I left a manila folder containing the documents in the conference room where the meeting took place. The name of the room escaped me, but it was adjacent to the main ballroom. I was seated in the front right corner.
The papers are of great importance to me as they contain critical information related to an upcoming project that I am working on. They include a proposal and a plan that I have been working on for several weeks. Losing them would have a significant impact and would delay the project.
I understand that finding lost items can be a difficult task, but I am writing to ask if you could please make every effort to locate the papers. If they are found, I would be exceptionally grateful if you could send them to me at the address provided.
I apologize for any inconvenience
this
may have caused and would like to thank you in advance for your help in this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
Alan NortonSubmitted by amandacflago23 on
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Task Achievement
To enhance clarity, consider specifying the date of the meeting, potentially adding a touch of personal appeal to your request to increase the urgency and importance.
Coherence & Cohesion
Try varying your sentence structures and using more connectors or transition words to create smoother transitions between paragraphs.
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter is well-structured, with a clear beginning, middle, and end, effectively organizing the information.
Task Achievement
You successfully conveyed the importance of the papers and stated a clear and reasonable request to the hotel manager.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite