The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The column graph illustrates information about hard
attacks
for particular groups ( men and women
) in the USA aged from 29 to 65 and more.Overall
, it is clear that
in the adult period, the number of men who had hard attacks
was more than women
.
According to
the given data , the gender of males were more likely to acquire a hard illness . To explain, the age group between 29 to 44 registered over 100 thousand men who had hard issues. Furthermore
, this
number increased sharply in age categories 45-64 and above 65 with approximately 424 and 440 respectively. Besides
that the women
had a significant increase in hard sickness. To shed light on agr groups of females, the observation shows that there were just three adult girls who had this
disease aged 20 to 44. But, when women
growing up the percentage of having hard attacks
rises as it appears on the chart. There were 136,000 and 374,000 women
attacked in the hard who
aged 45-64 and 65+ respectively.
In conclusion, the number of people who had hard Correct pronoun usage
apply
attacks
is considered the lowest rate among other groups for both genders.Submitted by sheikha1996mohammed on
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