You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table gives information about the number of international tourist arrivals in eight countries in 2009 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table gives information about the number of international tourist arrivals in eight countries in 2009 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table above shows the number of international tourist arrivals in eight
countries
between 2009 and 2010.
According to
the statistics, the increase in Europe was considerably stable, with Germany a remarkable exception. As to the two East nations, China and Turkey, there was significant growth. In 2009, China's international tourist arrivals were merely 22
million
, exactly one-third of the US's, which, in the next year, had increased by 33% to 45
million
. The growth ratio of Turkey was more noticeable, reaching 55%.
This
means that in 2010, Turkey had 12
million
international tourists than the previous year. Compared to the strong increase in the two East
countries
, Europe
countries
stayed steady at a high position. France, the US, Spain, and Italy's growth rations were all lower than 4%, but they originally had many tourists and
therefore
still attracted a large
amount
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of visitors. The exception in Europe
countries
is Germany, 109% increase ratio elevated its international tourists from 11
million
in 2009 to 23
million
in 2010.
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