the graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provided data on outlay by travellers coming to New Zealand from China, Japan, the UK, the USA, and Australia from 1996 to 2014. The data reveals a clear relationship between expenditure and
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, visitors from Australia spent the most money over the period
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China paid the least money.
It is clear that
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from
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graph, expenditure by Australian visitors increased dramatically from 1000 NZ dollars in 1996 to approximately 2300 in 2004.
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, by the
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2006, a peak of 2500 had been reached.
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, the USA slightly skyrocketed from 1996 to 2010. The UK dropped from around 500 in the first
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to about 250 in 2002,
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it climbed significantly from 2002 to the end of the
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. China had maintained less than 500 over the period.
On the other hand
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, Japan peaked at over 1000 in 2002,
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, it slowly fell to approximately 500 in 2014.
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