Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's character and culture from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
argue that they can possibly tell other people
's character
and culture
based on their clothes
. However
, I disagree with this
statement because their chosen clothes
only represent their fashion
preference but not representing
someone's Wrong verb form
represent
culture
or character
.
First of all, determining people
's character
can be seen by observing their attitude or on
how they talk. In fact, talking will intrigue someone to give Change preposition
apply
opinion
; Add an article
an opinion
thus
, people
can understand others' thinking way to react about
Change preposition
apply
the
certain things. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, their attitude may represent their character
as well which can be observed from their body language and voce
intonation. Correct your spelling
voice
vocal
For example
, when people
want to decide their
president during Change preposition
on their
election
, they always watch their candidates to have a debate or speech in order to observe every Add an article
the election
an election
candidates'
Change noun form
candidate's
character
.
Furthermore
, clothes
can only represent people
's fashion
preference
Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
instead
of their character
. It is because people
wear certain clothes
based on their ocassion
and situation. In fact, Correct your spelling
occasion
location
Fashion
may be influenced by certain culture
, but it only applies Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
in
some events that are related to their Change preposition
to
culture
. For example
, when balinese
women would like to have a Change the capitalization
Balinese
pray
in their temple, they usually wear their traditional Replace the word
prayer
clothes
called Kebaya. But, they will change their clothes
if they decide to have travelling with more
comfortable Correct article usage
a more
fashion
like short pants and t-shirts
.
In conclusion, some Capitalize word
T-shirts
people
cannot judge others' character
and culture
based on what they wear because clothes
are usually chosen based on the ocassions
. One of the Correct your spelling
occasion
occasions
way
that can determine Fix the agreement mistake
ways
people
's character
is when seeing someone talking because we can observe from their way of thinking, expression, and their body langauge
.Correct your spelling
language
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