Nowadays tourism generates a significant part of national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantage and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

These days, transportation has been developing immediately, so global citizens can travel to

other region

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another region

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not only so fast but

also

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for a range of parts

such

as visiting it;

moreover

, they have a great deal of

money

for these

countries

;

whereas

, they are a lot of disadvantages.

while

tourist

industries have

drawback

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drawbacks

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, I still believe that cannot overshadow the benefits. On the one hand, the good points of

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are varied.

Firstly

, they spend a number of

money

on destination

countries

for buying things like

suveniars

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souvenirs

,

visting

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visiting

places, transportation and so on;

as a result

, the economy of

countries

which have

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good

tourist

industries improve.

Secondly

, If a

countries

have a

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majority

of

visitor

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visitors

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,

then

jobs

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job

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oppourtunities

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opportunities

in

these area

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this area

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climb owing to the fact that the number of places that are related to

passenger

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passengers

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will be increased

such

as Restaurants, hotels,

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, and so forth.

Thirdly

, these governments are able to obtain

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foreign

funder for making new facilities like Dubai.

On the other hand

, improving

tourist

industries have demerits. On the one side, it is important that authorities invest so much

money

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enhance

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safety

inasmuch as when a country

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a lot of

terurism

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tourism

terrorism

and civil

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in it, the figure of people who

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come

for visiting

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to visit

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this

palce

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place

are

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reduced. On the

otehr

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other

side, when too many

population

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populations

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have a trip to some

countries

, their environment will be destroyed

due to

the fact that these communities need

accomodation

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accommodation

;

hence

, inhabitants build their

residental

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residential

areas in

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nature and

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it

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for earning

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money

. In conclusion, the fact that

passangers

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passengers

have several bad points;

however

, the merits for

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nations

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and

governmnets

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governments

government

are a lot and they can

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eclipse

the

disavantages

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disadvantages

.