The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table delineates three kinds of information on railway systems in six distinct urban areas including the date opened, distance of the routes, and number of passengers commuting every year.
Overall
, among all cities, Tokyo has the most passengers using the train, whereas
Kyoto has the least and the shortest railway. Moreover
, the longest route belongs to London.
The first longest network is 394 long which is located in London and was opened in 1863. however
, only 775 million commuters use this
facility, which is much less than Tokyo, opened in 1927 and is just 155 km but has 1.927 billion ridership. In addition
, Paris, with 199 lengths, was built in 1900 and transports 1191 billion people per year.
Although
Washington DC was opened in 1976, much earlier than the other three, it only is 126 kilometres long and only 144 million riderships
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readerships
Finally
, Kyoto with 5 million fewer commuters than Los Angeles and also
a shorter railway, 11 km, and 28 kilometres respectively, was opened in 1981 and 2001.Submitted by abolfath50 on
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