The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The pie graph illustrates data about the different kinds of transportation in Cambridge in two years ( 2008 and 2018.

Overall

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, the number of

cars

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was the most popular in the first year,

while

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used

bicycles

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was

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were

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the highest in the final year.

Furthermore

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, the popularity of walking and

bicycles

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increased

significatly

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significantly

as opposed to

cars

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and buses which decreased. In 2006, people in Cambridge were

prefering

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preferring

cars

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more than

others

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other

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transportation nearly

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apply

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half

overall

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, and the second most popular mode of

traveling

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travel

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was by buses with third .

However

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, the number of

bicycles

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was nearly a fifth and walking was the least 11%.

On the other hand

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, the

perecntage

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percentage

bicycles

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doubled to 30% and became the most popular in 2018,

likewise

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, the percentage of walking increased dramatically to a quarter, which was the second most popular transportation .

In contrast

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, the percentage of both

cars

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and buses dropped to 25% in 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, bicycles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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