The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The pie graph illustrates data about the different kinds of transportation in Cambridge in two years ( 2008 and 2018.

Overall

, the number of

cars

was the most popular in the first year,

while

used

bicycles

was

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were

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the highest in the final year.

Furthermore

, the popularity of walking and

bicycles

increased

significatly

Correct your spelling

significantly

as opposed to

cars

and buses which decreased. In 2006, people in Cambridge were

prefering

Correct your spelling

preferring

cars

more than

others

Correct quantifier usage

other

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transportation nearly

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

half

overall

, and the second most popular mode of

traveling

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travel

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was by buses with third .

However

, the number of

bicycles

was nearly a fifth and walking was the least 11%.

On the other hand

, the

perecntage

Correct your spelling

percentage

bicycles

doubled to 30% and became the most popular in 2018,

likewise

, the percentage of walking increased dramatically to a quarter, which was the second most popular transportation .

In contrast

, the percentage of both

cars

and buses dropped to 25% in 2018.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

155 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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