Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivating of committing it should always be taken account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Every
crime
must have a punishment
. Some people argues
regarding the Change the verb form
argue
punishment
for a crime
. Should circumstances in which crime
has taken place be considered or fixed punishment
be given for each crime
.
In my opinion, Change the punctuation
?
situation
should be considered before taking any decision.
One perspective says that applying fixed penalties is a good method as laws have been created for the Add an article
the situation
crime
culprit
has Correct article usage
the culprit
done
. It will help us in developing fear in every citizen not to repeat similar Verb problem
committed
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
crime
and society will be more safe. For example
, In 2012 a girl was raped in delhi
and there were four Change the capitalization
Delhi
culprit
Change to a plural noun
culprits
acccused
of that Correct your spelling
accused
crime
. Among those four, two of them were minor
so they were not punished as Fix the agreement mistake
minors
other
two Correct article usage
the other
criminal
. Recently, Change to a plural noun
criminals
In west
Correct your spelling
in West
Change the capitalization
Bengal
bengal
a doctor was assaluted and brutally murdered by Add a comma
bengal,
multiples minor
as they knew that they Fix the agreement mistake
multiple minors
will
released and Wrong verb form
would be
will
not be brutally penalized.
Wrong verb form
would
However
, sometime
it is the situation that Replace the word
sometimes
force
Change the verb form
forces
person
to commit a Add an article
a person
the person
crime
. A crime
could have a reason behind it. To Illustrate, On 31st december
2021, some Change the capitalization
December
thiefs
Correct your spelling
things
thieves
enter
our Wrong verb form
entered
neighbour
house at Change noun form
neighbour's
mid-night
and were trying to rob them and in Correct your spelling
midnight
thier
Correct your spelling
their
Change the spelling
self-defence
self-defense
they killed Add a comma
self-defense,
on
of the Correct your spelling
one
thief
. So, Proper investigation is necessary before penalizing a person and Fix the agreement mistake
thieves
punishment
should be given after analyzing the circumstances in which the crime
has occured
.
Correct your spelling
occurred
Same
Correct article usage
The same
punishment
for all crimes can help us in making safe
and secure society but innocent people will Correct article usage
a safe
also
be penalzied
for the unintentional Correct your spelling
penalized
penalised
crime
they did
. So, In my Verb problem
committed
opinion
proper investigation and Add a comma
opinion,
circumstanced
should be considered before punishing them.Correct your spelling
circumstances
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