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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
milk
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production
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 in four main countries namely
Netherland
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Netherlands
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, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala in three
decads
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decades
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such
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 as 1990, 2000 and 2010. It is clearly apparent that
in
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Netharland is the most
milk
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 producing country in all three
decads
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decades
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whereas
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 the least
production
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 is recorded in
Gaatemala
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Guatemala
. In 1990, the highest
milk
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production
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 country was
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 which made up 11,262,000 litres per year. That amount
was slightly fell
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 in 2000 with 11,155,000 litres and
then
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 rose
significanlty
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significantly
 to reached to 11,466,000 litres in 2010. The second gignatic
milk
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production
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 country is Australia. In
first
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the first
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 two
decads
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decades
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 made
similar
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a similar
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 amount of
milk
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 , in 1990 with 11,246,000 and in 2000 accounted for 11,105,000 , which
is
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 reduced dramatically in 2010.
The
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apply
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Tanzania
showed
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shown
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the
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an
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 increasing trend
of
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in
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milk
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production
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 over the
30
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last 30
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 years. In 1990, it registered for 87,000 and
last
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 year
grow
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grew
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 up to 1,550,000. Even though ,
the
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Gautamala was the
least produced
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least-produced
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 nation compared to others, where
production
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was rising
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rose
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 over the period.
Wich
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Which
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constitutes
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constituted
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 26000 in 1990, 55000 in 2000 and 84000 in 2010.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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