The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts
an information
about salary comparison, Remove the article
information
a piece of information
while
the table illustrates average
working Add an article
the average
of
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apply
hours
per week
for each professions
. Change to a singular noun
profession
Overall
it can be seen that the chart and the table have similarity
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similarities
on
the type of jobs, Change preposition
in
such
as police, nurse, firefighter, and underground driver.
Firstly
, in the first year, the police will get salaries
around
21000 Change preposition
of around
pounds
. After that, the salaries
will increase up to 20 per cent or 23000 pounds
. In addition
, at first,
the nurses can gain salaries
until
18000 Change preposition
up to
pounds
. Afterwards, the salaries
will be higher at 19000 pounds
. Same as nurses, firefighters only can achieve 10 per cent
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per cent per cent
than
their first Change preposition
of
salaries
, which is 40000 Fix the agreement mistake
salary
pounds
. Last
occupation, underground drivers when they Correct article usage
The last
are entering
their job, the salary was 50000 Wrong verb form
entered
then
will rise
to 51000 Wrong verb form
rose
pounds
.
Move to the table, police
Correct article usage
the police
has
40 Change the verb form
have
hours
per week
to work. On the other hand
, the nurse have
to spend their time a Change the verb form
has
week
until 38 hours
. Moreover
, firefighter has work hours
up to 55 a week
. Lastly
, underground drivers become
the least work Verb problem
have
hours
with about 38 hours
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, salaries, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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