The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities.
The diagram illustrates the differences in the outlay of an
island
following the construction of a few tourist attractions.
Overall
, the area changed dramatically, from a barren island
to a well-developed tourist destination.
The island
is about 250 metres long, surrounded by the sea on all sides. There are a few palm trees spread sparsely throughout the area; moreover
, there is a beach in the east of the island
.
First and foremost, a pier was constructed to ensure accessibility to the island
via sea. Furthermore
, vehicle tracks were laid down to allow better commutes to the reception, which was established in the centre, and further
north, up to the restaurant. Accommodation is set up on both sides of the reception, which are well-connected by walkways. Additionally
, a swimming area is allocated at the pre-existing beach.
In conclusion, the empty island
which only had a few trees is now a fully-functioning destination for individuals to spend their vacations, with accommodation, a restaurant, and swimming facilities at the beach.Submitted by khushichhillar on
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