You have recently moved to different house. Write a letter to an English speaking, friend. In your letter. Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Julia, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you that I have moved to a lovely new house. I have just moved 2 weeks ago but the process of settling into the house has just ended. Let me start by telling you why I decided to move to a new place.

First,

you know I did not like the distance between my workplace and my settlement because it was an hour.

Also

, the landlord has raised the rent. I do not think it is worth the old building. So, my new accommodation was built two years ago, it is close to one of the most popular streets in İstanbul.

However

, it is much noisier compared to my latest one.

In addition

, I have bought new

furnishments

Correct your spelling

furnishings

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because I was bored with old ones. I am thrilled to invite you to my new place. If you are available next week, I would appreciate hosting you. I have found a delicious pizza restaurant, and I would like to you try it too. Please let me know. Take care Yours lovingly Kris

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task response

You have done a good job explaining the reasons for your move and describing your new house. However, consider adding more details about the house itself, such as the number of rooms, the layout, or any special features it has.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is logically structured, but some paragraphs contain more than one idea. Try keeping each paragraph to a single idea to enhance clarity.

task response

The tone of the letter is very friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

You have provided a clear greeting and closing which makes the letter feel complete and polished.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

185 words

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