The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the government spending on numerous things like infrastructure, Education, healthcare, Pensions, Welfare, Interest on borrowing, Transport, Culture and leisure and other expenses from 2010 to 2015.
Overall
it is clear that
government expense on interest loans and welfare has increased throughout the years.
However
,
on the other hand
, expenditure on Education and Defence has declined over time.
To begin
with, government spending on welfare had a steady push through time and stood at a proportion of 13% with an increment of 5%.
Furthermore
, Interest on borrowing soared by a portion of 5% and stood at 10%.
In addition
, expenditure on Education, Healthcare, Defence and Transport had a minor downward in the percentage of 3%, 1%, 3% and 2%.
Therefore
, it remains with 21%, 20%, 14% and 1%. Other expenses like Pensions, Culture and leisure and others have no movement in ratio and stood up at 19%, 1%, and 1%
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