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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write what you perceive in 150 words.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write what you perceive in 150 words.
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The picture gives information about the tourist attendance visiting four different museums including the History
Museum
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, British
Museum
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, National
Museum
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 and Science
Museum
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 in London.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the number of
visitors
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 to the four museums given is the highest of all in August
while
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 the quantity gradually decreased in the
last
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 months. It can be seen from the charts that in August, the proportion of people visiting four reached a peak and stands out at the top among all with most of the data over 400000 and up to 700000
visitors
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. Following is the subsequent month with a slight decrease, fewer 100000 guests than the previous month. After all is December with the least
visitors
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, only the amount of tourists coming to the British
Museum
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 is over 400000.
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 that, 2 months including June and July witnessed no change except the number of
visitors
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 to the History
Museum
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 has a slight decline and remains the same.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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