The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The given line charts illustrate the time spent doing housework in households and the changes in owning
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electrical appliances in one area during the period between 1920 and 2019.
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, in the first graph, all indexes have had a rising trend during the past century. On the opposite, the second has
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trend of decreasing hours per week.  As seen in the illustration, the washing machine was the most useful thing
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the start, with nearly 40%
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, the vacuum cleaner was the
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and the refrigerator was the
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with 30% and 2%, respectively. But in 1960, the situation had turned upside down because the refrigerator had reached approximately 90%,
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the other two had the same with almost 70%. In the end, washing machines didn't much change,
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vacuum cleaners and fridges in 2019 could make the top result with 100%.
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, in the graph, we see that in 1920 humans did more housework than in other periods because in the start there was 50% and in the
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indicators only a bit more than 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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