The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below illustrates the figure for participants in different kinds of activities in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020. It's clear that except for

amateur

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dramatics

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and

film

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clubs, all activities showed a general upward trend, and

film

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club

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had the highest

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during the whole period. In 2000, around 65 citizens joined the movie club in Melbourne, which was

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highest, followed by martial

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and

amateur

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dramatics

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with the

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of approximately 38 and 27 respectively, which was obviously lower.Meanwhile, about 18 residents attended table tennis

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,

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no one took up in musical performances in 2000. After that, except martial

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and

amateur

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dramatics

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witnessed

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overall

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decrease, the others all increased until 2010,

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fell to 60, which was still the highest and was nearly double the

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of martial

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(37).

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, table tennis exceeded

amateur

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dramatics

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with the

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of 20 in 2010,

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musical

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performances

went up quickly to about 12, still the lowest.

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2010 to 2020,

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increased slowly and

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reached 65, followed by table tennis, which saw a dramatic soar and

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overtaken martial

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in 2015 and

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ended up with around 52, still the highest, followed by

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martial

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with 38.

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, musical performances

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increased evidently, surpassing

amateur

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in 2015 and

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to just under 20,

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mentioned

decreased quickly and ultimately fell to about 6 in 2020, which was the lowest.