The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The map demonstrates the changes
of
construction on an island for tourist entertainment.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, multiple changes have occured
on Correct your spelling
occurred
an
island. There have been built a hotel for Correct article usage
the
relaxing
vacation. Before Add an article
a relaxing
to
the construction of the building, Change preposition
apply
island
was Add an article
the island
tottaly
empty. There Correct your spelling
totally
was
no structures Change the verb form
were
and
other places where visitors could have their vacation.
After some time, a piece of land surrounded by water was developed into Correct word choice
or
huge
infrastructure with incredible convenience to have a great rest. Later after coming to the pier, we can Correct article usage
a huge
directy
see the reception where people can take the Keys to the rooms. In the west and east Correct your spelling
directly
conner
of the place, Correct your spelling
corner
there's
accommodations where the guests can stay. Change the verb form
there are
Also
, behind the reception
there is a restaurant where people can get food. On the western edge of town, there's a beach where they can relax and swim.Add a comma
reception,
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