The diagram shows the process by which a train ticket is reserved. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should Berth → a place you sleep in on a train/ship
The given diagram illustrates a group of nine steps to show the process of reserving a quick and easy
train
Use synonyms
ticket
, starting with reserving a Use synonyms
train
and ending with leaving the counter.
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First,
decide on which Linking Words
train
reservation to be done and you must choose a fantastic Use synonyms
train
to have a comfortable trip. Use synonyms
Then
you have to go to the reservation counter so they can help you to book a Linking Words
ticket
Use synonyms
train
.
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Next,
you should ask them if berths are available on the Linking Words
train
so you can have a nice seat. After that, an application form and pen are asked for. Use synonyms
Then
fill in all the details with wonderful handwriting so they can understand what you wrote.
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Next,
you have to submit it with fare money with reservation charges to allow you to enter. Next,before you check if everything is all right, you need to obtain the Linking Words
ticket
with Use synonyms
berth
number so that you can know where is your seat. Correct article usage
the berth
Finally
, leave the counter and go to your flight.
The above steps are the best to be followed to reserve a fast and smooth Linking Words
train
Use synonyms
ticket
.Use synonyms
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