Topic: The graph bellow gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Topic: The graph bellow gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph illustrates the percentage of the
population
living in urban areas in four Southeast Asian countries—Philippines,
Malaysia
,
Thailand
, and
Indonesia
—between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040. In 1970, the urban
population
was lowest in
Indonesia
, at approximately 15%,
while
Malaysia
, the Philippines, and
Thailand
were around 30%.
Malaysia
's urban
population
surged rapidly, surpassing 70% by 2020 and is projected to reach 80% by 2040. The Philippines
also
saw a steady increase, rising to 50% in 2020, and is expected to grow to around 60% by 2040.
Thailand
and
Indonesia
both saw moderate
growth
in urbanization.
Thailand
's urban
population
, which was slightly higher than
Indonesia
's in 1970, reached about 40% by 2020, with projections to increase to around 50% by 2040.
Indonesia
, despite its slower initial
growth
, is expected to see significant increases, from 15% in 1970 to over 50% by 2040.
Overall
,
Malaysia
experienced the most significant increase in urban
population
over the period and is projected to continue leading in urbanization by 2040.
In contrast
,
Indonesia
,
while
starting at the lowest percentage, shows steady
growth
and is expected to see a substantial rise by 2040. The Philippines and
Thailand
both exhibit moderate and consistent
growth
in urbanization.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.

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