The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart and graph illustrate information about the
joiners
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who have participated in the Olympics since it began. In general, the
number
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of
participants
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in the competition was increased from 1924 to 2012. By the way, the
number
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of males is always higher than females. Having looked at the bar chart, we can see that the
number
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of female
participants
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in 1924 was the lowest at around 100; meanwhile, the
number
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of male
joiners
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was higher than females at around 3000. Between 1952 and 1984, the
number
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of male
joiners
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had a slight increase from 4500 to 5100 and the
number
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of female
joiners
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increased from 600 to 1500 respectively. In 2012, the
number
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of male
participants
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increased and reached its highest point at around 6000 and the
number
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of females significantly grew and reached its highest
number
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at around 4600. Regarding the line graph, the
number
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of
participants
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at around 3000 in the first year before rising to 5000 in 1952. Between 1984 and 2012 the
number
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of
participants
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still increased from 6500 to 10500 and reached the highest point in the
last
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year. Thanks to the continuous fluctuation, the
number
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of
participants
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has jumped impressively from 3000 to 10500.
Besides
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that, we can see the
number
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of male
participants
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is always higher than female
joiners
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in each year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words joiners, number, participants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 12 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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