The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the swap for online consumption percentages in three various nations namely the United States of America , Canada and Mexico in
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years
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period starting in 1999.
Overall
, the most significant feature in
this
graph model is all ratio numbers increased despite differences in the degree of increase . In the
year
1999, all three
countries
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figures for internet
users
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percentage started below 25% .
To begin
with Canada from the
year
1999 to the
year
2003 the rate jumped high to hit almost 60% followed by steadily rising to record the highest point of 100%
also
for the United States of America the proportion of customers online consumers rose sharply over 6 years period ‏from roughly 24% to 75% after that it continued to grow gradually till endedend of the time in the
year
2009 by 5%.
On the other hand
, online was not that popular for Mexico compared with other nations ,
however
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of internet users rose steadily from approximately 5% to 40% for the whole ten years
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • users
  • Internet
  • trend
  • fluctuated
  • increased
  • remained stable
  • growth rate
  • sharp increase
  • anomalies
  • economic development
  • government policies
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • comparisons
  • initial
  • subsequent
  • consistently
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • significance
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