You arranges to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at homa now means that you mjst change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - explain the important event - apologise for the situation - suggest a new arrangement

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Dear David, Hope you are well. I am writing to apologise I have to help my cousin to be a wedding officiant so I can not go with you on Friday. On top of that, my cousin's current wedding officiant is in the hospital because of

the

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car accident in the morning.

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, I have most experience as a host so that's why he asked me to help. I am sorry about that I understand we make

this

gathering half

year

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ago, but his wedding is on Saturday and I need a couple of days to

perpare

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prepare

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, I make sure to make it up to you next time. I already have a plan in my mind, I will straight

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up to your place and will make a reservation

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your favourite restaurant.

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, I will bring some special stuff from my hometown to you. I'm so excited to see you.

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start counting the day. I promise we will have a great day. Lots of love, Carol

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single idea per paragraph

Make sure each paragraph contains a single main idea and expand on it clearly to enhance understanding.

advice

Double-check for grammar and spelling errors to maintain clarity and professionalism.

greeting and closing

You have appropriately addressed greetings and closing, which sets a friendly and personal tone for the letter.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is very appropriate and friendly, which matches the purpose of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Task 1 the images below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain. summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

People in big cities are facing many health challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What causes air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

Overall, men are more satisfied with local conditions than women.

Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

Some people think that the goverment should be responsible for crime prevention. Others believe that it is the responsibilty of the individual to protect themselves. Disucss both views and give their opinion.