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You arranges to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at homa now means that you mjst change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - explain the important event - apologise for the situation - suggest a new arrangement

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Dear David, Hope you are well. I am writing to apologise I have to help my cousin to be a wedding officiant so I can not go with you on Friday. On top of that, my cousin's current wedding officiant is in the hospital because of
the
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 car accident in the morning.
Also
, I have most experience as a host so that's why he asked me to help. I am sorry about that I understand we make
this
 gathering half
year
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a year
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 ago, but his wedding is on Saturday and I need a couple of days to
perpare
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prepare
.
However
, I make sure to make it up to you next time. I already have a plan in my mind, I will straight
it
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up to your place and will make a reservation
of
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 your favourite restaurant.
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, I will bring some special stuff from my hometown to you. I'm so excited to see you.
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 start counting the day. I promise we will have a great day. Lots of love, Carol
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single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph contains a single main idea and expand on it clearly to enhance understanding.
advice
Double-check for grammar and spelling errors to maintain clarity and professionalism.
greeting and closing
You have appropriately addressed greetings and closing, which sets a friendly and personal tone for the letter.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is very appropriate and friendly, which matches the purpose of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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