The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates data of five groups of households with different annual
income
in the Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
years
2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
,it is clear that
number
of families who earned more than 100,000 dollars saw a Change the article
a number
the number
slightly
increase threw 2015 Change the adverb
slight
reached
33 Wrong verb form
reaching
millons
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million
houses
. Additionally
, we can notice that the number
of people with anuul
income between 75,000 and 99,999 dollars is the lowest Correct your spelling
an
number
with limited change threw the different 3 years
.
Looking in
the data in more detail, the figures Change preposition
at
of
middle-class Change preposition
for
houses
was
the same over the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
years
as
little above 20 Correct your spelling
a
millons
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million
millions
houses
, For the
people with less than 25,000 Correct article usage
apply
number
of houses
owners increased by 4 Change the noun form
house
millons
in 2011 Correct your spelling
million
then
slightly decreased to 27 millon
in 2015.
Correct your spelling
million
On the other hand
number
of people gaind
between 25,000 and 49,999 Correct your spelling
gained
gain
dollors
started Correct your spelling
dollars
as
27 Change preposition
at
millios
Correct your spelling
million
millions
then
rose by three millons
in the next four Correct your spelling
million
millions
years
, then
back to 28 millions
in 2015.Change to singular
million
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