The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates data of five groups of households with different annual
income
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incomes
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in the
years
2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
number
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a number
the number
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of families who earned more than 100,000 dollars saw a
slightly
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slight
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increase threw 2015
reached
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reaching
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33
millons
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million
houses
.
Additionally
, we can notice that the
number
of people with
anuul
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an
income between 75,000 and 99,999 dollars is the lowest
number
with limited change threw the different 3
years
. Looking
in
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at
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the data in more detail, the figures
of
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for
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middle-class
houses
was
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were
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the same over the
years
as
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a
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little above 20
millons
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million
millions
houses
, For
the
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apply
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people with less than 25,000
number
of
houses
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house
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owners increased by 4
millons
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million
in 2011
then
slightly decreased to 27
millon
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million
in 2015.
On the other hand
number
of people
gaind
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gained
gain
between 25,000 and 49,999
dollors
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dollars
started
as
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at
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  27
millios
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million
millions
then
rose by three
millons
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million
millions
in the next four
years
,
then
back to 28
millions
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million
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in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, number, millons, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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