The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below

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The diagram provides key information about how to produce Olive

Oil

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until

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sales

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sells

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Overall

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, it is clear from the diagram that one step is picking and collecting the Olive from the trees.

In addition

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, there are complex steps to making

the

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Olive

Oil

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whereas

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the

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Olive

Oil

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has more trees everywhere , especially in North Africa.

According to

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what is shown, first of all,

collecting

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collect

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the Olive

then

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rinsing in

clod

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cold

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water.

Then

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using

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apply

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the machine

to smashing

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smashed

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the Olive to become

the

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apply

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liquid

oil

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subsequently

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producing

into

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two different shapes

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the liquid and

oil

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. The fourth part is putting a bag with holes. In terms of

fifth

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the fifth

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step, the machine

has pressing

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presses

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and

separating

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separates

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them into

oil

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and water. Eventually, they

wil

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will

moving

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move

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to storage and sales to

sale

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sell

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the Olive

Oil

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

135 words

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