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recent decades, the lion's share of some countries'
of youths, and only a small amount of
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includes elderly people. There are advantages and a disadvantage
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trend, which will be
in
essay. The advantages seem to outweigh the
some reasons, which will be explained.
To start with the disadvantage, the lack of expert workforces can lead to
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, food and clothing. To be more accurate, the entire young and naive
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experienced older professionals to foster their knowledge about their
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.
,
new comersCorrect your spelling
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cannot
pass the promotion steps and become
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future experts.
, in some factories, the junior workers practically learn how to
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the job better from the senior forces.
Moving to advantages, the main benefit of the young adult
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is that the government can be
to cut down the excessive cost of taking care of
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elderly individuals. Seventy-year-olds and over need 24 hours
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and it can cost a lot for
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societies.
, younger societies may contribute to economic growth. Concerts and Festivals will be held
the young
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interests, These enchanting events create
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more
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aliveCorrect word choice
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cities, attracting so many tourists from all around the world.
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industry plays a crucial role in economic promotion.
, the fresh learners of
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have the potential to follow different career paths and occupations,
the
's financial background for the next generations. The more various experts in a
, the more
choices and job opportunities are available for our future children.
In conclusion, adolescents and adults are more beneficial for societies, as they are ready to work and spin the vehicle of industry and make more money for their
.
, older people need a large amount of funding provided by
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in the
without earning any money. Youths
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help their hometown to be more attractive to tourists, leading to financial benefits for the
.