The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables

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illustrate data about the temperatures of two cities

London

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and

Sydeny

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Sydney

and hours of

sunrise

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and

sunset

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in the same weekend In December 2018.

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, the temperature in

London

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was cooler than in

Sydney

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While the

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sunrise

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Sydeny

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Sydney

earlier

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is earlier

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than in

London

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and

Sydney

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sunset

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is latter

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latter

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later

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than

London

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sunset

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. In terms of

London

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, the highest

temerature

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temperature

was 13

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while

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the lowest was 3

dgree

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degree

degrees

Sunday

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29th , which was lower than

Sydney

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's temperature.

London

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sunrise

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was at 8:05 a.m. on Friday 28th and rose to 8:06 on

Sunday

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30th.

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London

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sunset

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time was at 15.57

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first

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day and increased to 15:59 on

Sunday

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30th. With regards to

Sydney

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, it had the highest temperature at 31 degree on

Sunday

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30th and the lowset degree was 17 on Friday 28th.

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Sunrise

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time of

Sydney

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was at 5:45 a.m on Friday 28th, which was earlier than

London

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, and it rose only one minute on

Sunday

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30th of decembe.

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, Syndey daylight ended at 20:06 in first day and increased only one mintute in other days.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sunrise, sunset, sydney, sunday with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

temperatures
hours of daylight
comparison
London
Sydney
December 2018
weekend
information
data
summarise
select
report
features
analysis

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it is argues that mobile phones/gadgets have no space in classrooms. agree or disagree?

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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