The chart below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non-renewable energy in united states in 2009 and 2019.

The chart below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non-renewable energy in united states in 2009 and 2019.
The chart illustrates the
production
of
electricity
through renewable and non-renewable
energy
within a
time-period
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of 2009 to 2019 in
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the Unites
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Unites states
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United States
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.
Overall
, Natural gas was the most
electricity generating
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electricity-generating
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non-renewable
energy
source and from renewable
energy
source,
it
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was wind. Coal was at
top
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in 2009, producing 1756
billion
kilowatt
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kilowatts
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but it dropped drastically to 966 in 2019. Natural gas came on top in
electricity
generation with 1582
billion
in 2019 despite being at 921 in 2009. Renewables and nuclear
also
showed a growth in
production
from 437 and 799 in 2009 to 720 and 809 in 2019, respectively.
However
, petroleum, which started
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at 57
billion
kilowatt
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kilowatts
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in 2009, showed a drop in its
production
by 17
billion
. Wind is the highest
electricity producing
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electricity-producing
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source in renewable
energy
, tripling its
production
from 94
billion
to 300
billion
in 2019. Wind is followed by Hydroelectric which
remain
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stable throughout the
10 year
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10-year
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period with 273
billion
kilowatt
production
. Solar showed
a
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significant growth reaching
to
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73
billion
, despite starting from 1
billion
in 2009. Geothermal and Plant/animal matter
also
increased
its
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their
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production
from 15 and 54 to 16 and 58 in 10 year time period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, electricity, energy, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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