Task 1 The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templetion between 1990 and 2005.
The maps given show the development that happened in the Seaside resort of Templeton over fifteen years from 1990.
In 1990,
town
was a much greener residential area with lots of trees and individual housing units. But in 2005, it has been urbanized with many facilities and a factory.
The Add an article
the town
town
experienced dramatic changes over the 25 years since 1990. Most
noticeable one is, Correct article usage
The most
almost
all the trees have been cut down making way for the newly added buildings. Correct word choice
that almost
Moreover
, the single house
units Add a hyphen
single-house
in
Change preposition
on
west
side of the river are reconstructed Add an article
the west
to
apartment buildings. A new road was built paving the path to the newly constructed supermarket in the southwest of the Change preposition
into
town
.
Major
change that the Add an article
The major
A major
town
has gone through is the extension of the railway line along the south side of the river. School
and the hospital remain untouched even though more houses Fix the agreement mistake
Schools
has
been built around them. A ferry has been constructed next to the railway station where the factory is Change the verb form
have
also
developed.
Overall
, the comparison reveals that the town
changed from a rural to a more urban landscape.Submitted by hashkweerasekara on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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