Task 1 The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templetion between 1990 and 2005.

Task 1

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templetion between 1990 and 2005.
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The maps given show the development that happened in the Seaside resort of Templeton over fifteen years from 1990. In 1990,
town
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was a much greener residential area with lots of trees and individual housing units. But in 2005, it has been urbanized with many facilities and a factory. The
town
experienced dramatic changes over the 25 years since 1990.
Most
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noticeable one is,
almost
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that almost
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all the trees have been cut down making way for the newly added buildings.
Moreover
, the
single house
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units
in
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west
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the west
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side of the river are reconstructed
to
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apartment buildings. A new road was built paving the path to the newly constructed supermarket in the southwest of the
town
.
Major
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The major
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change that the
town
has gone through is the extension of the railway line along the south side of the river.
School
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and the hospital remain untouched even though more houses
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been built around them. A ferry has been constructed next to the railway station where the factory is
also
developed.
Overall
, the comparison reveals that the
town
changed from a rural to a more urban landscape.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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