The chart belo gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by American by age range in 2013. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart belo gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by American by age range in 2013. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart demonstrates the data on the ratio of
income
and
expenditure
by
Americans
belonging to the different
age
groups
in 2013.
Overall
, individuals had the highest
income
and
expenditure
rate in the
age
groups
of 35-44 and 44-54. It is obvious that in all ages
Americans
had higher
income
rather than
expenditure
, except when they were under 25, as in that
age
group
people
spent money more than they earned.
Additionally
,
people
over 75 have nearly the same
income
and
expenditure
.
However
, the minimum in earnings and spending was observed among young
people
aged below 25, their
income
was equal to 30000
dollars
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3,000
,
while
expenditure
was just below 30000
dollars
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3,000
. Starting from 25 until 54
people
worked hard and
as a result
, had a higher
income
in the
age
groups
of 25-34, 35-44, 45-54. It
also
should be mentioned that the maximum of
this
chart constituted about 80.000
dollars
as an
income
of
people
aged 35-44 and 45-54. Most of the
times
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, there was a big difference in the ratio of
income
to
expenditure
, only except
ages
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younger than 25 and older than 75.
Americans
spent money the most when they were between 45 and 54, particularly 60000
dollars
, which was the maximum in all
age
groups
.
Furthermore
, the amount of money that
Americans
spent grew until they reached 45-54, but after that, a downward trend was observed. Clearly, the minimum was reached as they got older and became 75+, approximately 35000
dollars
, which was the same as their
income
.
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