The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possibles sites for the supermarket.

The map illustrates the two proposed

location

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locations

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for a new

supermarket

in Garlsdon.

Overall

, it can be seen that the

supermarket

is planned to

locate

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in the countryside and in the

town

centre

. In terms of a new

supermarket

in

countryside

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the countryside

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, it is

sited

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just off the main roads in the

north-west

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, which

is

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the way roads from

town

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the town

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centre

to the Hindon.

Moreover

,

this

location

is passed by railway in the

south-west

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southwest

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from Cransdon to Hindon and opposite. The accessibility makes the new

supermarket

tend to have many customers to purchase

,

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since

this

location

is passed by three places with 39,000 population in total.

Regarding the

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second

location

of

a

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new

supermarket

is proposed to be in the

town

centre

that has two main roads, Cransdon and Brandsdon, which

has

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have

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15,000 and 29,000 population, respectively.

Moreover

, it is

also

passed by the railway. The

supermarket

offered in the second

location

provided enormous customers.

However

, their

location

in the

town

centre

is no traffic zone, which

is make

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the

location

is

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inaccessible for

the

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customer

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customers

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who

used

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use

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personal

transportations

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transportation

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. In conclusion, the

country side

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as

location

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the location

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for the new

supermarket

is more reliable, as for getting a lot of customers to purchase some product in the

supermarket

.