The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the 8 steps
process
of making storage
building from concrete Correct article usage
a storage
canvas
.
Overall
, the 8 steps
Correct your spelling
8-step
process
of making area
for Correct article usage
an area
storage
starts from manufacturing the concrete canvas
and ends with having the dome
for storing after it setted
for 20 to 24 hours.
The Wrong verb form
is set
storage
building process
commences with Correct article usage
the manufacuring
manufacuring
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
process
of making concrete canvas
form
dru concrete before delivering Correct your spelling
from
to
construction sites. The concrete Correct pronoun usage
it to
canvas
is then
unwrapped and spreaded
on the ground. The Correct your spelling
spread
spreaded
concrete Correct your spelling
spread
canvas
is grounded by pegs, having 10 metres spacing with each other.
The fifth step of the construction,
is to blow the concrete Remove the comma
apply
canvas
to create a storage
dome
, attracted by a door. The concrete canvas
dome
is then
watered until it to be
8 Change the verb form
is
metres
high Correct your spelling
8-metre
dome
. The wet dome
is rest
for setting for another 20 to 24 hours before Wrong verb form
rested
it
available for storing.Add a verb
it is
it was
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