The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart illustrates
that
the worth of three different sectors of Correct word choice
apply
international
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the international
an international
market
in Southland in 2000, 2020 and 2025 respectlively
.
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respectively
It is clear that
,
the chart depicts various trends of each Remove the comma
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sectors
. Change to a singular noun
sector
International
tourism Correct article usage
The international
market
shows that
gradually Verb problem
has
increase
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increased
while
the sale of meal products are
significantly decreased.
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Further
, it can be observed that the foreign tourism market
has rosen
by approximately 1 Correct your spelling
risen
million
in 2020. Moreover
, it is predicted that the market
will be reached
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reach
the
peak in 2025 by remarking 10 Change the word
its
million
of
worth. Change preposition
apply
However
, export of daily
products is rapidly Correct your spelling
dairy
climed
from 7 Correct your spelling
climbed
claimed
million
to 10 million
and the date is forcasted
that Correct your spelling
forecasted
the
considerable decline in 2025.
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a
In addition
to that, the meal product sector's contribution is
decreased Verb problem
has
up
to nearly 5.5 Change preposition
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million
and the chart is estimated
that the Wrong verb form
estimates
market
will be further
got wrosen in future because the predicted data mentioned the value as exactly 5 million
. In 2020, international tourism involved
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is involved
to gain
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in gaining
highest
income from Change the article
the highest
the
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export
and Fix the agreement mistake
exports
similary
, the Correct your spelling
similarly
similar
market
will be reached
the peak of the export Wrong verb form
reach
market
of southland
in 2025.Capitalize word
Southland
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