The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000,

2020, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart illustrates
that
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the worth of three different sectors of
international
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the international
an international
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market
in Southland in 2000, 2020 and 2025
respectlively
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respectively
.
It is clear that
,
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the chart depicts various trends of each
sectors
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sector
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.
International
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The international
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tourism
market
shows that
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gradually
increase
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increased
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while
the sale of meal products
are
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significantly decreased.
Further
, it can be observed that the foreign tourism
market
has
rosen
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risen
by approximately 1
million
in 2020.
Moreover
, it is predicted that the
market
will
be reached
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the
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its
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peak in 2025 by remarking 10
million
of
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worth.
However
, export of
daily
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dairy
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products is rapidly
climed
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climbed
claimed
from 7
million
to 10
million
and the date is
forcasted
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forecasted
that
the
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a
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considerable decline in 2025.
In addition
to that, the meal product sector's contribution
is
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has
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decreased
up
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to nearly 5.5
million
and the chart
is estimated
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estimates
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that the
market
will be
further
got wrosen in future because the predicted data mentioned the value as exactly 5
million
. In 2020, international tourism
involved
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to gain
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in gaining
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highest
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the highest
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income from
the
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export
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exports
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and
similary
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similarly
similar
, the
market
will
be reached
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reach
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the peak of the export
market
of
southland
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Southland
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in 2025.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words market, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • categories
  • international tourism
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparisons
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