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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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Dear Liz, I hope
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 email finds you well. I am sorry for not writing a
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 to you earlier. As I was focused on job hunting .
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, after 500+ applications I got selected for the
company
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 which I always dreamed of.
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, the
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 is located in Pune so I might immigrate there. I have
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, cleared my interview and all the formal documentation.
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, there is only one thing left and I need your help in writing a
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 of
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 which states, my
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 performance and attitude.
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letter
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 of
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 is very vital for my job as my career is dependent on
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.
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company
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 reflects more on
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 because they believe in how you behave and co-ordinate with another peer at work. I would really appreciate it if you could write a
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letter
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 for me. I am writing down all the details of the
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. yours sincerely , Nishi Prajapati
Submitted by prajapatinishi2001 on

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coherence and cohesion
Consider merging the job importance with the details in one paragraph, and request for the reference in another paragraph for better structure.
task achievement
The letter clearly mentions the job and the importance of the reference letter.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used for a formal letter.
task achievement
The tone remains formal and respectful throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • reference letter
  • former teacher
  • job application
  • recommendation
  • career goals
  • professional development
  • academic performance
  • responsibilities
  • company
  • skills
  • qualifications
  • gratitude
  • support
  • aspirations
  • context
  • interaction
  • additional information
  • correspondence
  • tailor the reference
  • specific qualities
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