many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this isa positive or a negative development

There is no doubt that these days most people prefer

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from

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the countryside

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to

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cities

due to

many benefits ,which leads to

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a decrease

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numbers of population in

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the countryside

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immigration from rural to urban

area

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development ? In

this

essay, I will discuss both sides and draw my perspective. There are several positive points of

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moving

to

cities

.The main

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to support

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claim , moving from

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to

cities

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individuals to explore and obtain many opportunities.

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, the number of occupations in the city

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higher compared to the rural area ,resulting in desire the

individuals

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to move to

cities

in order to enhance their income .

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reason is ,

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cities

contain several facilities

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to improve the

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life .To

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sports and entertainment facilities asset to elevate the level of

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quality

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.

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, there are adverse

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development when the population in the

countryside

is decreasing

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and

increasing

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in the

cities

,

firstly

, the traffic

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significantly increase and cause a lot of

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.other wise

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, it can

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pollution leading to spread the

disease

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the computation among people will increase which cause a mental issue

such

as depression and anxiety. In conclusion , I could say that the deterioration of the

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population in

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is

also

in need

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consideration so the government should

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people who live in rural areas by improving the level of living.