The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The provided line graph illustrates various
origin
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origins
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of polluted weather in England over a fifteen-year
priod
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period
. A glance at the graph reveals that both total
air
pollutants
and industry sources witnessed a significant downward trend in the
UK
.
However
, households and transport experienced a modest change over the period. In 1990, the
amount
of total
air
pollutants
was nearly 7
million
tonnes
in the United Kingdom. (Which was the highest
amount
of
air
pollution source over the period).
Then
, total
air
pollutants
dropped substantially and reached roughly 3
million
tonnes
in the
UK
in 2005.
Similarly
, the percentage of
air
pollutants
with the source of industry was just under 6
million
tonnes
in England in 1990. For the next 6 years, the
amount
of polluting
air
with industry plummeted and reached approximately 3
million
tonnes
in the
UK
in 1996.
In contrast
, the
amount
of
air
pollutants
for transport was 1
million
tonnes
in the
UK
in 1990.
Next,
the percentage of
air
pollutants
caused by transport levelled off in England from 1993 to 2005.
Furthermore
, the
amount
of
households
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air
pollutants
was 1
miilion
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million
tonnes
in the United Kingdom in 1990. Afterwards, the percentage of polluting
air
by households decreased moderately, and
at the end
of the trend hit the bottom around
of
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0
million
tonnes
in the
UK
in 2005. (Which was the lowest
amount
of
air
pollutants
over the whole year).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, uk, amount, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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