The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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The provided line graph illustrates various
origin
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of polluted weather in England over a fifteen-year
priod
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period
. A glance at the graph reveals that both total
air
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pollutants
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and industry sources witnessed a significant downward trend in the
UK
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.
However
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, households and transport experienced a modest change over the period. In 1990, the
amount
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of total
air
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pollutants
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was nearly 7
million
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tonnes
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in the United Kingdom. (Which was the highest
amount
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of
air
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pollution source over the period).
Then
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, total
air
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pollutants
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dropped substantially and reached roughly 3
million
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tonnes
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in the
UK
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in 2005.
Similarly
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, the percentage of
air
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pollutants
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with the source of industry was just under 6
million
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tonnes
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in England in 1990. For the next 6 years, the
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of polluting
air
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with industry plummeted and reached approximately 3
million
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tonnes
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in the
UK
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in 1996.
In contrast
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, the
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of
air
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pollutants
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for transport was 1
million
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tonnes
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in the
UK
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in 1990.
Next,
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the percentage of
air
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pollutants
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caused by transport levelled off in England from 1993 to 2005.
Furthermore
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, the
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of
households
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air
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pollutants
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was 1
miilion
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million
tonnes
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in the United Kingdom in 1990. Afterwards, the percentage of polluting
air
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by households decreased moderately, and
at the end
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of the trend hit the bottom around
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0
million
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tonnes
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in the
UK
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in 2005. (Which was the lowest
amount
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of
air
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pollutants
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over the whole year).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, uk, amount, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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