All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

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of obesity among the residents. Which

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detail. On the one hand, increasing

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the consumption of fast foods in the communities had an adverse effect

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the population.

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recent years

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the main reason for

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obesity.

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of glucose in their body and uncontrolled by

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overweight among the inhabitant, and when we look

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consume a vast quantity of sweets.

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this

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the pattern of their lives and a strict commitment.

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them about the benefits.

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which had a beneficial effect in reducing weight. In conclusion, I believe that any change in our daily routine will directly enhance our health and

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us from

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weight. Encouraging

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students to practice exercises on of the crucial elements to tackle

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this

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