The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The line chart compares the amount of money for
three
most popular cakes in a shop in 2014.
In general, people consumed more bread than pies. Correct article usage
the three
In addition
, the Linking Words
buns
sale decreased sharply from September to the end of the year.
It is clearly seen that Use synonyms
initially
, bread was the most popular consumption in the store, around $ 80,000 before falling down significantly by nearly half in March. Over the next 6 months, the figures for bread fluctuated, after that it increased strongly and reached Linking Words
at
the highest point again. Change preposition
apply
While
Linking Words
buns
consumption went up dramatically by $30,000 from Jan to May, before remaining stable for 3 months. From August, the figures for consuming Use synonyms
buns
hit Use synonyms
a
lowest point Change the article
the
to
$30,000 Change preposition
of
at the end
of the year.
Turning to the pies, the number of sales rose slowly for 10 months, Linking Words
however
, it significantly came up to $40,000, higher $10,000 than Linking Words
sale
of Add an article
the sale
a sale
buns
in December of that year.Use synonyms
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