The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist

facilities
The two maps below illustrate an
island
before and after the establishment of touristic facilities. The main difference we can see
that
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is that
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the
island
went through major changes. It is evident that
island
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the island
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got
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has
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more amenities for travelers and the destination enriched its touristic site after the reorganization. As it can be seen on the first map the
island
was predominantly surrounded by the sea,
beach
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and beach
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and the place itself was empty and full of palms.
However
, the second map demonstrates that the accommodation for passers-by was arranged
as well as
the restaurant and the reception located near the guest houses. The pier was built for ships and marine vessels’ convenience. Another distinction that can be noted is the beach that was transformed in order for visitors to swim safely. Footpaths and vehicle tracks were set up; footpaths around the reception area for people on foot and vehicle
track
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tracks
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for cyclists and people, who use other forms of transportation on the
island
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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