You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work, but it is very expensive. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the content of this course and its benefits • why you would like to attend this course suggest how him/her could help you

Dear Edward, I am writing

this

letter to seek permission to attend the Advanced Digital Marketing course, which is designed to implement precise marketing strategy by data mining in customer performance. It is a five-day intensive program offered by the Fudan Business School and is scheduled to start on Monday 18th of

this

month.

This

plan is essential for our company because our sales performance has been declining in recent months. I ensure the modules throughout the course are geared to our needs

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since we identified that the root cause mainly lies in the existing customer group. After the training, we should be able to apply the methodologies

accordingly

in the solution and boost the sales revenue. As the training is full-time, it would be greatly appreciated if you could avail me a five-day paid leave till 22nd of

this

month, I believe my absence would not affect the normal functioning of the department, as most of my colleagues have agreed not to take leave during these days. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Antoine