The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart above provides key information about the four countries, which are ,
China
, Thailand, Indonesia, and South Africa and how much money they received and how did they spend that cash between the years 1974 and 2014.
To start with, the four nations spend their money in three aspects, Catering, Medicine, and Finance. Use synonyms
However
, it is clear to the naked eye that the total amount of money in 1974 is much bigger than it will be in the next 40 years. Linking Words
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Also
the chart shows that Medicine was the most spends in all Add a comma
Also,
the
aspects and South Africa is the one with the highest budget, with more than 60 Correct article usage
apply
million
dollars in 1974 only, Use synonyms
then
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China
with 62 Use synonyms
million
dollars, Use synonyms
then
Indonesia and Thailand with below 50 Linking Words
million
dollars.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, when it comes to finance, in 2014 Linking Words
China
Use synonyms
shows
a massive decrease before and after 40 years, Wrong verb form
showed
for instance
, Linking Words
China
in 2014 had only 6 Use synonyms
million
, and before that, they had over 60 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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