The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart above provides key information about the four countries, which are ,
China
, Thailand, Indonesia, and South Africa and how much money they received and how did they spend that cash between the years 1974 and 2014. To start with, the four nations spend their money in three aspects, Catering, Medicine, and Finance.
However
, it is clear to the naked eye that the total amount of money in 1974 is much bigger than it will be in the next 40 years.
Also
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the chart shows that Medicine was the most spends in all
the
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aspects and South Africa is the one with the highest budget, with more than 60
million
dollars in 1974 only,
then
China
with 62
million
dollars,
then
Indonesia and Thailand with below 50
million
dollars.
On the other hand
, when it comes to finance, in 2014
China
shows
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a massive decrease before and after 40 years,
for instance
,
China
in 2014 had only 6
million
, and before that, they had over 60
million
.
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