The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Table displays how much money was distributed as
support
to four countries including China, Indonesia, Thailand, and South Africa in 1974 and 2014. The bar graph illustrates the way financial support
was spent in the same years. Overall
, the need of
money Change preposition
for
support
in these four nations shrunk in all the
three categories: catering, medicine, and finance.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, in 1974 South Africa received the largest financial support
with 65 million
dollars
, followed by China with 62 million
dollars
. The figures for Indonesia and Thailand were 55 million
dollars
and 48 million
dollars
, respectively. Forty years later, the amount for China plummeted sharply to 6 million
dollars
. While
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
Thailand Change preposition
apply
also
fell by 30 million
dollars
, Indonesia and South Africa experienced roughly 25
% decrease each.
Regarding the categories of financial Correct article usage
a 25
support
, in 1974, medicine was supported the most with 80 million
dollars
, and the figures for catering and finance were 70 million
dollars
each. In 2014, The most significant drop was observed in catering by 45%, while
medicine and finance declined by 20% and 5%, respectively.Submitted by takuya13sugimoto on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words support, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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