The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given graph illustrates data on how the weekly revenue spent by families in a single country in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, in 1968, the most weekly salary was spent on food. On the other hand
, the least of it was spent on fuel
and power
. In 2018, people spent most of their money on leisure activities. Furthermore
, they spent the least of their cash on fuel
and power
.
In 1968, the weekly income was spent the most on food at 35%. Following that, both housing and clothing shared the second place
at 10%. After
this
, leisure activities arrived in third place
, scoring around 9% of weekly cash. Moreover
, both household goods and personal goods achieved just above 7%. Finally
, fuel
and power
were in the last
place
at above 5% of weekly profit.
In the last
year, leisure activities were the most thing that residents spent money on, marking around 23%. In addition
, both housing and food stood at 18% and 16% respectively. After that, families spent on transportation around 14% of their weekly returns. Finally
, fuel
and power
came in last
place
at 4%.Submitted by seifhasseb222 on
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