You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket

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Dear Raman, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have bought a

ticket

for Diljit Dosanjh's

show

at Rogers Arena, but I will not be able to attend. If you are interested, just let me know so I can save

this

ticket

This

show

will be memorable because the audience gathering will be exponentially high, and Diljit will perform his new album songs, so you can imagine how the aroma will be.

This

time, Hollywood singer Trever Scot will

also

perform with him in the latter half of the

show

. I was so excited about

this

show

. Arsh and I bought two tickets one month ago.

However

, yesterday, I learned that my father needs immediate kidney surgery.

Therefore

, the doctor has given us a date that matches the

show

's date.

Moreover

, you and Arsh are good friends. You guys will enjoy it there as both of you are funny by nature. Please let me know in advance so I can send my

ticket

through Arsh, and he will give it to you at the office. I am not concerned about the

ticket

price, you can pay me later on. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, GS

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coherence cohesion

You could slightly improve the logical flow by breaking down longer sentences or splitting ideas into shorter, more focused paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Although your response is well-structured, consider adding more transitional phrases to enhance the flow between the points.

task achievement

You have addressed all the required points clearly and thoroughly.

task achievement

Your tone is friendly and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Your letter has a logical structure and a clear greeting and closing.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

208 words

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