You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket
Dear Harman,
Hope
this
letter finds you in good health.My concern is to write this
letter to offer a concert ticket
for Daljit's show
.Actually,I got to know about this
show
last
Monday from one of my friends and immediately,I bought a ticket
as he is my favourite singer along with
my other friends.This
show
will be organized next Sunday in the Toronto community hall.
However
,unfortunately,I have a business meeting on the same day regarding my new business,which is impossible for me to cancel because I waited long for this
meeting.Therefore
,I will not go there to attend this
show
.
Moreover
,I also
do not waste my ticket
.I know that you have a holiday on the next weekend.So,If it is possible for you to watch this
concert.Then
, you can go as I have sent a soft copy of the ticket
to your email address.
Hope so you will go and enjoy this
show
.
Yours Sincerely,
Kamal.Submitted by kamalkaur.er on
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task achievement
Your letter successfully covers the three prompts: mentioning the concert, explaining why you can't go, and how your friend can receive the ticket. However, adding a bit more detail about the concert could make it more engaging.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is good, but ensuring more clarity between the paragraphs could improve it. Using linking words or phrases can enhance the flow between ideas.
coherence cohesion
To enhance your single idea per paragraph, try to avoid combining multiple points in one paragraph. For instance, you might split the reason for your inability to attend and the method of passing the ticket into two separate paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-structured and appropriate for the context, adding a personal touch to your letter.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is friendly and polite, making it suitable for writing to a friend.