The following pie charts show the main modes of transportation people used to to travel to university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.

The following pie charts show the main modes of transportation people used to to travel to university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The pie chart illustrates the primary vehicles chosen by
college
students
or
university
employees to go to the
university
in 2004 and 2009. It is noteworthy that most people liked to go to the
university
by car in 2004, but in 2009
bus
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the bus
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was preferred. In 2004, more than half of the poll participants used
car
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the car
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to go to the
university
, followed by
bus
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, at 33%. Exercising
while
going to the
university
was not favoured by the
college
students
and
university
employees, showed by small
fractions
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fraction
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of people chose cycling (9%) and walking (4%). The least favorite vehicle was
train
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a train
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, comprising only 3% of the respondents. Meanwhile, in 2009 the ultimate vehicle used to travel to
university
switched to bus, accounting for 46% of the polls. The second option liked was transporting with a car, at 28%.
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trend
with
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2004,
pedaling
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to work was the third option for
the
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apply
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college
students
and
university
employees, though the percentage
is
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doubled from 2004, in 2009
is
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accounting
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for 16%. Travelling to the
college
by walking or riding the train
were
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also
the least popular among
college
students
and
university
workers, at 6% and 4%, respectively.
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