The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
map
compares three locations, one of which will be chosen to build a leisure centre. Overall
, there are buildings constructed in area
A and B, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
meanwhile
Add a comma
meanwhile,
area
C is located beyond the trees.
The first option, area
A, is on the east side of the map
. Located just beside the river that goes to the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
map
. The area
is occupied with
a factory and can be accessed from the main road.
Location B is in the middle of the Change preposition
by
map
, with multiple accesses to get to this
area
. An apartment complex is build
in Wrong verb form
built
this
place. Similar to area
A, this
area
is located near the river. However
, area
B might require more steps to get to the river.
Lastly
, the area
C which occupy
the western part of the Change the verb form
occupies
map
. There is a building-free area
behind the forest which can be constructed into something completely new without demolishing buildings. The large field is behind the trees and access are
not available to reach Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
area
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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