The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
map
compares three locations, one of which will be chosen to build a leisure centre.
Overall
, there are buildings constructed in
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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A and B,
meanwhile
Add a comma
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area
C is located beyond the trees. The first option,
area
A, is on the east side of the
map
. Located just beside the river that goes to the
center
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centre
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of the
map
. The
area
is occupied
with
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by
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a factory and can be accessed from the main road. Location B is in the middle of the
map
, with multiple accesses to get to
this
area
. An apartment complex is
build
Wrong verb form
built
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in
this
place. Similar to
area
A,
this
area
is located near the river.
However
,
area
B might require more steps to get to the river.
Lastly
, the
area
C which
occupy
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occupies
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the western part of the
map
. There is a building-free
area
behind the forest which can be constructed into something completely new without demolishing buildings. The large field is behind the trees and access
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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not available to reach
this
area
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • space constraints
  • costs
  • prime location
  • secluded
  • natural area
  • serene environment
  • remoteness
  • accessibility
  • transport facilities
  • advantageous
  • undisturbed leisure
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