Obesity in children is a serious problem in a number of countries. What are the causes of obesity in children? Discuss the possible alarming effects of this problem in the future.

Nowadays,

children

are prone to

have

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having

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a

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apply

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serious

disease

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diseases

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. Even,

the

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though the

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disease should attack

the

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apply

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adults

one

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apply

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,

but

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apply

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because of unhealthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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,

children

must

aware

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of many

kind

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kinds

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of

illness

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. One of

crucial

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the crucial

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problems that

children

facing

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face

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today is

obesity

.

Obesity

can lead to many other

healthy

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health

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issues,

such

as

diabetes

.

This

essay will discuss how unhealthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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make

children

become overweight and

diabetes

as

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is

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the most negative

impacts

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impact

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of it.

First,

parents

are not realize

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what they give to their

children

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For example

, my friend has a kid around three

years

old. It can be said that my friend with her husband were not well-educated. So, she gave any kind of food to her daughter which is not good, like excessive sugar,

coffee

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and coffee

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, and she did not even give an exclusive breast milk

as

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for as

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long as two

years

.

Thus

,

this

is really dangerous for the kid because five

years

later, she

is

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easily

to get

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sick because of

overweight

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the weight

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that she got from sugar consumption.

Additionally

,

obesity

can bring a health issue like

diabetes

. Normally, people who

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are exposured

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exposured

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exposure

exposed

to

this

disease

have

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are

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ages

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around 25

years

above

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and above

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.

However

, the reality says

different

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differently

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.

For instance

, in Kamboja, there are 40 per cent of

children

who have

diabetes

. The most possible causes

is

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are

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obesity

or they were not controlling what they eat.

Therefore

, not only

obesity

but

also

diabetes

become a serious problem to

solved

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solve

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.

To sum up

,

children

have a serious problem like

obesity

. Certainly,

this

problem

have

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has

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effects

for

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on

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kid's healthy,

such

as

diabetes

.

Moreover

, the cause of it is sugar consumption that

out

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is out

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of control.