Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

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a

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stressful

momements

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moments

moment

movements

,

art

brings joy and peace.

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of

this

, spending money on

art

always

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a debatable issue;

therefore

, some individuals

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that the legal bodies should not spend

momey

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money

on the arts,

whereas

some folks contend

that is

also

vital. I

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partically

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partially

particularly

agree with the former statement.

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with,

art

is crucial to society and

human's

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with

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various ways.

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and foremost

is

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,

art

gives job opportunities to

artiest

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artists

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; henceforth they can earn their daily bread

and

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better and lives their life with

better

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the better

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way which will automatically contribute to the

countries

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economy.

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, A recent survey conducted by

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Time News of India

indicate

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that in Mumbai 12% of

population

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the population

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depend

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on

art

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artwork

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worke

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work

works

which

gives

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a big contribution to

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the Indian

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economy.

Additionally

, the

art

represents the culture and tradition of particular regions which attracts

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tourism to the country. Many countries organize big

festival

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festivals

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and

art

shows based on their traditions and culture which increase tourism and save the culture and ritual of nations.

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, an article written by The University of Toronto shows that

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in 2011 increased

a

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number of

art

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an art

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festival

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festivals

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that

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helps

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to

climb

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tourism in China by 10%

than

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campare

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compare

compared

to 2009. In a nutshell, there is no doubt that many other aspects an important for the

developement

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development

of any country;

nevertheless

,

the

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art

also

support

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supports

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for

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apply

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the

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growth. Notwithstanding with situation,

authroties

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authorities

should spend money

for

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on

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the future of

art

.