The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table chart below illustrates information about citizens of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey and on which activities they prefer to spend their time in 2002.
Overall
, we can see that residents of Ireland chose to spend their time and money on food
. While
Italy is the most stylish country.
Approximately one-third of citizens of Ireland prefer to spend their money on food
, drinks and tobacco. While
only around 2% of all did with their hobby and education. One-sixth of people in Italy ate and spent their time on food
such
as drinks and tobacco. And slightly under 10% of people went to shopping. While
only 3,20% of this
country is interested in studying.
Spain had 18,80% and 6,51% in food
and clothing respectively. And Spanish had the lowest percentage in study education and the same trend had residents of Sweden in food
items. Finally
, Turkish people had more proportion to eat tobacco and drink and learn and do their hobbies.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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